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Reviews for "The Breakfast"

Needs work on the Ukulele

Well, you get a lot of marks for the surrealism of your piece - I had little, if any idea what was actually going on there, to be honest.

Your own drawing style isn't that bad, so I'd suggest that you draw your own dolphin, just to keep it all under the same 'style umbrella'. If you can't draw dolphins, try tracing one, as it would look better than having a poorly cropped piece moving about on screen like you did.

Perhaps it could have used more on the vocal aspect of it, as that would certainly help to convey a plot for the piece overall - given a few more tweaks, you'll get there. Perhaps also you could practice your playing of the ukulele as well, so that it sounds more professional?

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hmmm

being random for the sake of being random, isn't random..

WTF

I don't know what was going on in this it made no sense. But even with it's lack of anything coherent it was AWESOME.

Odd...

That was the odd... very odd... I can't really say anything else...

Jesus Jeans?

Ummm, yeah. The dolphin confused me a little.. and what's with the Juicy Jeans?
Haha.. The people looked cool though.. I like that "rough drawn" animation.