as a first game
not bad, but terminally slow, the art is, well, lets say 'prototypal' to be tactful... and you just throw the player into the game.... needs an intro screen, istructions, never a good idea to just launch into the game... yeah, you got ng comments, but not every venue has them, etc. Just a solid design principle and a pet peeve of mine.
So all in all, not a bad first effort, but still -- not in submissible shape just yet I have to say,
Keep it up though -- some more hard work and you potentialy have a winner on your hands!