Okay not as bad as project TTFN seems to think
but thats mostly because he isn't being fair in considering all the actionscript etc that went into this game. First things first: How do i shoot? Player falls through the floor if hes going too fast, try improving the thickness or check time or whatever you used for your platform collision. more than pixels please, if you had drawn an actual master chief i would have given you a 6 maybe. English is bad, _Your_ is there when _you're_ should be there. Also try making it a bit easier, I keep dying due to insane jump lengths / heights. I know you worked hard, but you still got some stuff to do, and don't expect a 3.00 or higher on the first go, consider yourself lucky your first submission was good enough to pass.