There is little doubt...
You should be choreographing fight scenes fort he next Star Wars movie, one that you can poston Newgrounds. An extremely creative display.
Reviews for "M.O.T.O.R"
DutchinLive responds:
Thanks!
Pretty cool
Great flash. I would like to start off by saying how awsome the 3D stuff was and space battle was really cool. I also liked how the lightsabers looked when they swung them.
Even though it was an awsome flash, some things could use some improvement. I would like to say first how they moved...was awkward at times. It looked like they were moving a little too slowly. When they swing their lightsabers, it has to be faster. Maybe have them have a faster swing instead of having to take 2 seconds to do slash. I also found the voice acting a bit weak and the madness element to be lacking a little (madness is all about the fast paced, blood filled killing frenzy that wasn't in this flash).
But other than that, it is a good, solid flash. 5/5 9/10
DutchinLive responds:
Like I've said before, I agree to all this, and I'll definitely take everything on board for the next one!
Good Job!!!
I love your work...and I love star wars....
Little critique
If your going to do laser blast visually for your fighters don't use machine gun fire.
lol some what better then i thoughr it would be
kinda bad on the voice acting and music was not in the mood of it and also i loved on the mandalorian ship it sed made in nevada