I lol'd.
The lyrics are really funny! XD And once you animate it, I think it'll be even better! :D :D
I lol'd.
The lyrics are really funny! XD And once you animate it, I think it'll be even better! :D :D
clever
it's really good, please remake this with full animation then it will be a 10/10
Its already made, look on youtube
Good song, Good animation.
Good song, and good animation. i would like to see it in color though.
Seeing the title in my daily e-mail...
...how did I know this was going to be a parody like this? Ah well, I've seen the videos both for the original by Coolio and for the Weird Al parody "Amish Paradise", and I gotta say, this was probably the best of the three. Then again, that's probably just because I'm more familiar with DBZ than with the ghetto or the Amish.
PROS:
Song = awesome. Since the songwriter was yourself, and it was by all appearances made specifically for this movie, I can mention that. I really liked the line about playing dead like a dog, nice and witty like rap probably should be.
CONS:
Looked a little more like a storyboard or something for a future animation than like a real animation itself. You say it's a WIP though, so I'd like to see the "finished" version if and when it comes out.
OVERALL:
Not perfect, but quite a bit better than average. 4/5, 8/10.
my only complaint is that it could have used better voices, other than that its great