Actually quite good!
One of those things that's so stupid it makes you keel over laughing, because once you get into the meat of it, you realize just how good it is.
Some criticism, of course. I understand the lack of video quality, "testing the waters" as you say, so that's fine. The criticism is the voice. You probably sound a lot like the Vegeta and Nappa from the American dub, but the gruffness really kind of throws it all off. No offense, I'm sure you tried very hard, but maybe you should consider grabbing someone from the Audio Portal who's done this sort of thing before.
I really hope this gets cleaned up. The lyrics are absolutely inspired and I can't wait to see the finished product. Good on ya, mate!