Stiff and a bit slow
The animations used were a bit stiff: a few emotions were also too bland to actually transfer the right setting. You did well for a first flash tho, so I hope you keep it up and keep on expanding your talent.
Reviews for "Paranormal Creatures"
interesting
I feel the animation could have been tweeked a little better and the creature at the beginning looked.......lame (sorry).
Still, u put alot of effort in it and i look forawrd to seeing your next flash
Weak story.
Most of the animation was good, but where was the story? You have a main character who's supposed to have fans being a paranormal investigator, but instead of doing anything professionally, he goes out there with a flashlight and a video camera? Why? Did his team call in sick that day? Locked the rest of his gear in his car? And then after his scuffle, did anyone believe him? Did any of this really happen? I mean, maybe he was just on hallucinogens and thought he was a paranormal investigator who had a fight with a monster. Maybe at the end when he looks so sad, it's because he's going to go to jail because he's an idiot who called 911 when he was tripping on shrooms. You've got skill, and you can do action, just need to make it make sense now.
ok...
This isn't scary at all, nor is it all that impressive graphically. Nice attempt, but could use a lot of polishing.
i don't like it
The idea is good but the animation is poop also it's too short.