Freaky XD
CHUUUPAAACAAABRAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!
Freaky XD
CHUUUPAAACAAABRAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!
Great job for a first submission
The synching was pretty decent, the action and suspense were good, and art-wise the style was simple but effective. I'd definitely keep at it!
My 2 cents
You wonderfully managed to build the suspense however the animation was too clear, clean, almost to a clinical point, to be believable for a horror. It should have been darker, smudged...hope I'm making any sense here.
Nevertheless, I see some major talent here. Get out the almost robotic movement at points, add ambience and I'm positive you'll do (even) better.
P.S. Sound was spot on, kudos there!
Great animation,needs work tho
Your animation was fantastic!!!!
The sound effects were realistic and the enviroment was spooky.MY hair raised on the back of my neck when i saw that dead body.However tho,even tho your story was great.It lacked length,or at least a sequel.I mean it was short,and the monster got away.So why not a sequel! btu over all,good job man.
good
this was good but as with other reviews i agree that it needs some work