eh...
the concept wasn't that interesting and the 'epic' orchestral background music came off as kind of overdone. the music didn't match the actual mood and feeling watchers get from watching the piece. and the transition from the two music tracks could have been a little more clear. I got it... but it didn't really connect well.
as for the animation, I felt it could have been more exciting to fit the mood you were trying to portray. it felt more like a storyboard sequence since a lot of it was just still images