Reviews for Edwin Ep01

[inneres]

...but

Nice design concept, I like the color and texture choices. The story actually seems to be going somewhere (too many animations don't). The voice work is too monotone for my tastes, but perhaps you're working towards something stylistically. Good concept work... but...

Your lines have square caps, and would benefit from better use of different thicknesses. There seem to be some line errors too. Example: Edwin's nose. It looks like an extra line is sticking out the end. Add to that a square cap, and it is distracting and looks awful. This sticks out as a problem just about on just about any object that is supposed to look organic, ie hair, face, clothes.

Kieran-s responds:

Yeah, I used a type of line cap the makes the lines pointy insteadt of blunt, but it keeps glitching. But oh well, its only a nose.

[azzarom]

Where's The Action???

Not as good as it could have been because of the sound and also it did get a bit boring.

[AlchemyRocks]

Pretty Sweet Flash.

I hope to see how this endeavor turns out.

The only thing that bothered me about the flash was the lack of blinking...It just stuck out to me. Probably because their eyes were fairly stationary for the most part.

Kieran-s responds:

Haha, good tip, I'll keep that in mind.

[Jonathan-Moore]

Hmm

Well it certainly wasn't funny, but the story was definitely interesting and I will totally check out the other two parts in the story.

[easykill1]

meh.

Animation is ok except lip syncing. Humor isn't funny. Voice acting is WAAAY too stiff