wow...
the plan wasn't that bad, but this is obviously an obsessive idiot. Still quite good though.
Reviews for "Edwin Ep01"
great start not really a episode but a trailer
i gave a 5/5 but it seamed like it was incomplete nothing actually happened here and i felt it was over really when it started not really a episode but a trailer so my over all review is a 8 but i voted 5 because i like it enough not to want to bring the score down
Kieran-s responds:
Thanks man, I can see why you thought that, second one is longer though. :]
It was ok for a first episode...
but it didn't really do much to draw me into the "series".
The voice acting like everyone said blahblah good yea...
Tho the one thing that I couldn't stand was the lip syncing ( try to work on it it more) seems like you did that trick lazy animators use that just repeat the same movements.
You have a good art style but the lack of alot of face expressions make the some characters seem a little bland and doesn't fit the voices but the cartoonish look gave me a comedic impression (this certain animation seemed more serious then your style let on)
Over all the art (background/characterdesign) kept me interested more than the story. sorry It was kinda boring but I understand stories don't start with explosions...unless your Micheal Bay.
*This is all opinion so please don't take any offense to my blunt criticism I'm just trying to help. You probably won't read this anyway becuz it's way to long. ha
Kieran-s responds:
Thanks for your honesty. I deffinatley did get a bit lazy with lypsyncing but oh well.
okay so vampire slayer needs some facial hair..
his voice just doesnt match that boy-ish looking face, all im saying is throw in some facial hair, haha liked his nose though. and why does the vampire slayer's girlfriend sound like she has something up her nostrils?
Average
The voice acting was sub-par. The animation was smooth, but the character designs weren't anything to write home about. The story isn't anything special either. It's just another vampire hunter with a sassy female sidekick going after the one vampire so many have died attempting to defeat. Overall, the flash is just average. Why it was on the front page, I have no idea.