wtf
preety weird story sounnds like you made it on the spot....well idk what to say....i like how you had such creative characters lol
Reviews for "Zimmi EP 1"
Amazing visuals... story lacking.
The visuals are dreamlike! Really awesome. The story seems kind of pointless and predictable though. It has great imagination, but is just lacking some substance. I appreciate the children's storybook style, but even good children storybooks have a message, or a lesson to learn. In this story everything happened so capriciously.
Rutger responds:
Hmhmhm, yeah, you're right. I'm probably too young to spread morals ha.
Nice... but there was a problem...
I don't know if this was just a glitch for me or ment to be... but only like... a 4th of the page loaded. The entired flash played however only a quarter of the screan was doing anything and the rest was white. So i'll rate this here on the interesting story and what i could see of the art and try back again later to watch the entire thing to give it it's 0 - 5 vote.
Rutger responds:
Oh... That's not supposed to happen, try refreshing the page maybe? I never heard of this error before.
Good story, good timing, bad animation.
I give you a 7 because you had 2 out of 3 quailities for a nice piece of art. You need to spend more time on your character animation. Get some nice poses, and actually have the characters body move when they speak.
Rutger responds:
Do your arms move when you speak? q:
I think I get what you mean though, and you're right.
Thanks!
Story good, animation lacking
The story and music were pretty good in this animation. It felt like one of those cutesy fairy tale type of things but with a more mature twist on it. I don't know how to describe it but I did indeed like it.
The artwork was alright as well. It fit the tone of the story and it was very colorful and fun to look at. As stand-alone art it was pretty good. However when you tried to mix it with the simplistic animation it brought everything down. I realize more of the focus was on the story in this movie, but that doesn't mean the animation had to be as simple as it was. If you plan on making more of these I would put more animation into it. It doesn't have to be the greatest animation, but more of it would really enhance the stories you want to tell.
Overall a nice story with animation that left much to be desired.
3/5
Rutger responds:
Alrighty then. I'm gonna add more animation in the next episode, it's already written...
Thanks!