Really great
I really loved this. Great crazy storyline and amazing art. Please make more!!
How long did this take you?
~tb
Reviews for "Zimmi EP 1"
Rutger responds:
Thanks!
It took me about 3 weeks.
Simple and sweet.
~ Animation/Graphics ~
You had a nice simple style here. Nothing too amazing, but not bad at all. Just kind of somewhere in the middle. Very simple animations that didn't look like they took too much work, but it gave the submission a nice relaxing feeling. Interesting use of lines and colors makes this very cartoon like.
~ Story/Content ~
A random story, but I think it really makes fun of how generic story lines are nowadays. At least if you weren't trying to poke fun on generic story lines at least that's what I got from it.
"Nice sunny day, Conflict happens, Conflict resolved, conflict happens, big gap in story line, conflict thought to be resolved, conflict really is resolved, and they live happily ever after." Yeah, pretty generic, but almost in a funny way.
~ Audio ~
The voice started off strong, but then started to die out later on. That's the reason for my 9 instead of the 10. I don't know if the voice actor started to talk quieter or if the music got louder, but he started to get drowned out later in the submission. Other than that decent music and voice acting.
~ Overall ~
Except for the voice starting to die off towards the end of the submission I don't see anything wrong here. Good work, nice style, interesting approach to a generic story line, etc.. Keep up the good work.
~ Review Request Club ~
Rutger responds:
Thanks dude! Yeah, the sound is getting a bit mixed up at the end, if I'd lower the volume of the music at the end you would've had to turn up the volume a bit too much though. I wish there was a way to increase volume inside flash itself ):
Very plesent
Was that the monsters horn in the stew? I need to know
Rutger responds:
yes :3
Cute
reminded me of Adventure Time, but only a little.
Good job!
Rutger responds:
That's an awesome comparison! :D
Thanks!
Wonderfully Innocent Plot
And I enjoyed the style. It reminds me of marshmallows wrapped in cotton candy with a kitten ready to paw at it.
Anyways it is a lovely flash and you should be very proud of your labors.
Rutger responds:
Meow!