Birbiglia is awesome
but seriously. Did you need to animate crosses in every room? Is your religion so important to you that you need to subtely infiltrate it into animations? Good stuff though. Making an animation where the audio is completely suplied to you and there is no required originality by your part must be so difficult. You get a 3 for animation.
Too Bland...
to me this was not grabbing enough by that i mean if wasn't you didn't reach your full potential as you requested i will give you an example of a good comedian is : Robin Williams ( check him out on youtube with his stand up ) Or Even James "Jim" Carrie and if you wanna go into wacky s**t try Jeff Dunham. Stuff like that don't stay at one subject go from one to another carry on the conversation. And work on your animation it could use some improvement. I'm not saying it was terrible but it wasn't good enough for a 10 but keep trying you'll have a break through soon. Good Luck :)
ok???
this is soo stupid but i respect that people like this kind of humor but for me this is deep sheat!!!!!!!not good