Reviews for Legends of a New Earth P1

[Lou500]

Very good effort.

But the execution could've been a wee bit better. The animation is a bit choppy and the voice acting... eh, it needs some work. Your voicing for the rabbit sounds could do with some work, especially for your rabbit character.

You might want to work on your drawings and animation technique and try adding more frames. Your effort and passion however, is very evident in this and you look like you had fun making it. Keep practicing and I'm sure you will make a fine animator and storyteller out of yourself.

Jessismith responds:

Hey, thanks for the helpful comment. :)

[ericklebleu]

Nice.

You got a pretty nice story line, and the artwork is not unlike disney's lion king. I mean, it looks a lot alike. Perhaps watch it to look at the running, because they constantly tilt their heads while doing so, and it doesn't look natural, and also the way the jaw moves is weird too. Perhaps get someo though, the audio is not so good.

Jessismith responds:

Hey thanks. I will take that into consideration. :)

[sOMeonEUNo]

very interesting

your storyline is actually of real movie quality. the drawing and animating could use a bit of improvement but as you continue working with flash I am sure it will get better. I think you can go really far with this, keep up the good work!

[xtended12]

Not bad

Not bad indeed... But there are some bugs , nice story and I imagine that was a hard of work - working frame by frame drawing this characters. So good luck for the next animation!

Jessismith responds:

Yeah....my computer did cause a lot of bugs also in the program...especially towards the end because of the fil being so large. It was very difficult with months of work. Thank you. :)

[HandDrawn]

"Ok"

Im probably being a bit biased here as i despise furry animals talking.
Your animation was a bit patchy here and there lots of gaps etc. and the running cycle was quite odd looking
BUT
You have a great deal of potential in your work and your story telling is great.

Jessismith responds:

Hey thanks. :) I guess there aren't many who like furry talking animals. Glad ya liked the story though.