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Reviews for "Paper's edge"

Kool

Looks like you drew the guy, took a picture, then erased him a little after you drew the next movement leaving a Nifty blur effect. Two THUMBS UP!

stickbob123 responds:

EXACTLY what i did. you're good..you are good.

Very Nice

Very awesome job man, I mean wow. I enjoyed the blur effect you gave him as he moved. At first I thought that was because of the video quality, cuz you know some videos in flash don't want to stay high quality. Never the less, I soon saw that you in fact blurred him away.
My only problem is the angles, sometimes the camera seems to far away or to much on an... angle with the paper. I get the idea of you wanting to show it was on paper and all, but maybe make your drawings larger next time, if you continue this.

Good Job

stickbob123 responds:

thanks...i had a good camera, but its zoom quality was :( and >:p so you know how that goes. i recently had that camera stolen :( so i got the newer model which is frikkin amazing and seems like it was made, specifically, for paper's edge 2. (still working on the title...might just leave like that.)

it was good

but make it faster and also make it so that when the stick fiqure runs another stickfiqure punches and stops him

stickbob123 responds:

number 1 ill make him faster and 2 i have no idea what you're trying to say. just PM me k?

Very good

This definitely has potential, the blur from were you erased him from before was a good touch, but one idea tho, maybe you should make it disappear after a certain point or fade out? a way you could do this is do the stick figure without pressing too hard and then use flash to go over it? but yeah speed up and if you animated more then one thing at a time so there is a bit more action going on then great!

stickbob123 responds:

thank you mr.!

Pretty Awesome

Cool stuff, but I hope that your sequel has a higher fps because some parts of this movie just felt kinda slow. Also the eraser smear trail made me laugh.

stickbob123 responds:

hey thanks...and yes speed will be adressed in numba 2