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Definitely better than your average Madness short. I really liked the music, I feel that it fit the mood of a presidential assassination quite well. Good animation and use of simple tricks to add nice effects, such as the flags blowing in the wind. In the future, you'll probably be better off making movies a bit longer with some more development in them. This is a bit short.
Well, that seems to be the main problem, so i'm glad the animation itself was good, and i could definetly develope a better animation.
Could have been better
~ Animation/Graphics ~
The animation seemed to follow that of most other madness related films in which it involves death and surprisingly this had very little gore in it at all actually. It seemed more like the guy just had a deep hate for the president at the time and demolished him, how does Freeman fit into the storyline by the way?
~ Audio ~
The sound was kind of ok but it could have been a tad bit more dramatic and felt like it was a last hope or something along those lines.
~ Overall ~
Biggest thing to improve on is probably how long it was, you could have gave a little nice back story to it of why the assassination happened the way it did.
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Not bad, but short
-Good-
This was done pretty well and has an interesting topic. The backgrounds and graphics were very well done. I liked the music here and it fit with the flash.
-Bad-
The main flaw here was the shortness of this flash, it kinda ended very abruptly.
-Overall-
A pretty good movie, but needs to be longer.
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Not bad at all! Better than I can do!
~ Animation/Graphics ~
Even for usage of sprites (I use sprites too) it was done very well. You had very nice backgrounds and a lot of detail in all of the scenes. Animations were very smooth and almost everything looked great.
I didn't want to sound weird, but when I saw Coop's review said basically the same thing then I didn't feel so bad. :P The breasts on the women need to be done much better. They were oddly apart.
~ Animation/Graphics ~
A little short, but I think this could be improved by you simply looking into the research of the Kennedy Assassination and making an animation that goes along with the whole thing. You could even test out all of the assassination theories that there were all in one flash, etc.. Something like that would improve the quality and the length of the submission.
~ Audio ~
I didn't see anything wrong with the audio. I liked it all around. Sounds were synced well and song was well chosen. Good job here.
~ Overall ~
I think the biggest thing to improve was just the length of the submission by adding more plot and different scenes then you had. I know it was just for practice, but I still have to review it like a "real" submission. Great animating though.
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Oh believe me, I know alot more than that about the actual assassination. kinda a facination of mine. I wasn't going as much for accuracy on this one but if I redo it I definetly will. Thanks for the review though and definetly some valid points.
Needs more
I was decently animated, but too short, for my liking.
Since you've chosen to make a flash based on one of the events of the 20th Century that gained the most media hype, you're not short of sources for research and chances to improve the storyline dramatically.
I'd suggest that you have some sort of madness fight within the book depository, where the assassin was rumoured to be hiding inside. This could compromise the shot of the sniper from there, so a second sniper has to be deployed from behind the grassy gnoll, in order to complete the mission. This would make the thing so much longer and better to watch.
Also, please spend more time drawing the boobs of the women, they look so weird - closer together, not perfect half-spheres, that sort of thing. There's plenty of research you can do online for this ;)
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