lolz
you really should make more
Reviews for "EFN Episode 3: Purpose"
Love the story
So this was pretty good I really love the "STORY" here on this one it also has some really nice "EFFECTS" and view points, you really know how to bring the story alive in this one, there is no major changes that is needed in this one as you have presented a very good story and animation to go along with it, so nice job indeed.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
there is no major changes that is needed in this one as you have presented a very good story and animation to go along with it
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ARGHHHH MY ORGANS!!!!!!
that was sick and twisted. but i can't quit watching. i just hate the ending when he just rips out his organs. but the rest, the background story, the intensity, all of those traits are what a true animator needs plus a good crew. i wish i could animate like you, but i guess i'm stuck with my poor animating skills.
I'll be honest instead of just kissing ass.
The animation on this is really good. Yeah, the tween abuse was definitely there, but the fbf was better than 3/4ths of the stuff on Newgrounds. The length is really impressive too. I love flashes that can go on for a while and entertain me rather than just be a brief spurt that seems rushed. I think your author's comments were kind of attention whoring though, lol. Obviously you didn't lose all will to work on this or you wouldn't have worked on it. The act of working on it at all requires will unless you're a robot. Even if someone had a gun to your head, if you worked on it it would be because you have the WILL to do so, even if your goal is just to stay alive. So yeah, that was totally reaching.
That aside though, The plot seems a little cliched. The main character has amnesia except remembering a girl he needs to find? That's been done to death. So then a bad guy teleports him to a random place where he's in a tournament... No comment. Then we get teleported again to another random place? Deus Ex Machina. The weird relationship between your main character and his bad side isn't explained very well, and both characters are extremely irritating I must admit (along with that boy thats retarded). Also, the lines for the evil guy are so bad and corny that they nearly inflict physical pain on me as I watch this flash. I think you're an amazing animator and artist, but this story needs a drastic rewrite. You should try to wrap this up soon and start a series with a little more depth. Good job though.
this is just the story of F.E.A.R. and mean built to kill that from F.E.A.R and Leo is Point Man and Mona is Alma Wade and last that evil thing is Paxton Fettel