Well
I have to say I'm quite disappointed in you. This wasn't very good in my opinion. I think you're getting too relied on tweens, and you basically left fbf out. I know flash has tweens for a reason, I mean I use it too (but then again I suck at flash) but I think it was a bit overused this time.
The voice acting was basically the same, the music was OK, but the jokes.. I don't know, maybe it's just me, maby it's because my primary language isn't english, but i didn't like them at all. Sorry