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One thing:
TURN UP THE VOLUME. I couldnt unerstand anything they were saying. :'(
Reviews for "Snow Wars Introduction"
Fro responds:
You turn your volume up.
No in all reality that was the best I could get the audio without it messing up. Sorry. :(
There's going to be more of them, right? :P
It's been a while since I've written a review, so I'm a bit cold about how this works.
Alright, so I've got to say you put yourselves in a difficult place, with the building expectation from Hay Wars. Still, you kept your cool under the cold pressure of your fans, and did pretty well. I like the whole "rallying your troops" skit and how, even though the leaders are mortal enemies, they still have a lot in common, like having to deal with the incompetence of their drone buddies (maybe I should act in the next one.)
I don't quite get why one guy was holding a tree branch, was it there just for the lulz? The acting was actually believable to a certain degree, and the choreography was great. So....with all great home-made movies, I have to ask this: was anything in it improvised, or was it all planned out before shooting took place? Either way, it made me laugh, so great job, and I look forward to seeing more like this.
I almost forgot, for the constructive criticism, I would say the introduction was a little awkward; I think it was supposed to be a parody of other movies openings, but it didn't quite get through-Try having the words come at you, and over do-it by making it a long sequence, and have someone read it as it flies by.
Other than that, I thought it was brilliant, even if a bit too short.
8/10
P.S. great work on the main menu
Fro responds:
The guy with the tree branch was for lulz. Thank you for paying attention enough to see this. :)
Everything was sort of planned out, but we made all the lines up there on the spot pretty much.
Next time I'm going to make the really slow, exaggerated Star Wars intro that slowly rolls up the screen.
Thanks for the great review. :)
pretty good!
Good points:
Audio overall good; you can hear everything
Sounds effects good.
Flash parts well designed.
Things for fixing:
A little bit of pixelation in the video, however, not bad enough where it makes the video bad.
the sun in the camera.
The time with the transition of the text in the beginning: I feel that it took too long, but maybe I just read fast; and When it says, "The highly anticipated" anticipated is halfway off the screen, so you can not see it too well.
Overall, I liked it, and I will be waiting for the full movie out soon! :)
Fro responds:
Text problem is my fault and is noted.
The sun problem is something I will take notice of in the future. (Sometimes you don't think of it when your taping)
And well.. that's all I can fix though. :P
Thanks for the review.
Entertaining
Ah, hey Corey. Im sry this has taken so long to get to you, but im more active now so, heres my review.
Well, the voice acting is very well done, and as many people have stated the music goes along heavenly with the whole war theme. I also like the location, if that counts for anything.
Again ill go along with people saying the quality isnt amazing, and i also had some problems with glares from the sun at some points during the movie.
It is better than anything i can do. If this is the trailer, then i am pretty sure the whole movie will amazing. Good Job! And like you said if the violence wil be better than Hay Wars, then nothing could go wrong.
Fro responds:
The only thing that could go wrong would be that it won't actually get finished because it's such a tedious project. :(
Thanks for the review.
Okay
It wasn't great, but it's passable, I guess.
Fro responds:
Hm, alright. Thanks for the review.
I know it wasn't great, but it was fun making. And sometimes that matters just as much. :P