Reviews for Snow Wars Introduction

[XwaynecoltX]

Interesting

~~REVIEW~~
aww ok this was actually better made then alot of these real video like stuff, now since its not art like stuff might be harder for me to review but if anything i would suggest the guy in the "WHITE" shirt to have a differant darker color as the white shirt and the white snow in the backround didnt work well, but as far as the flash itself it was good and you should make more of this, nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The white shirt as stated above

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining movie

~X~

Fro responds:

Thank you and props will be noted and payed more attention to in the future.

[Sonofkirk]

PUT IT ON YOUTUBE!

You damn statwhore, get it off from Newgrounds and put it on Youtube! Haha, seriously now. Although I already saw this episode, I enjoyed watching it again. I'm going start with the things that could be improved.

I didn't really like the first animated words that say stuff like "A FroNick Production", the moved too much and it was also too long, you could easily make it readable and shorter. I noted that some of the sentences didn't fit the window very well. I won't bitch about the flash and audio quality since you explained the problem on the author's comment and because you provided a link to the high quality version, that's a nice idea. That's pretty all I have to complain about.

Now the good points. I think I've already told you that I loved the music, although the audio quality is quite low :P. The soundtrack gave to your flash an epic side. The audio and the very good acting associated created a very solemn global feeling if you see what I mean. I also enjoyed the menu with the interactive flakes, that was a good idea.

Keep submitting projects you worked hard on. I'm looking forward the next episodes :D.

Fro responds:

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Ten years later sonofkirk writes a review even though I review his stuff the day it is submitted.

Ha, thanks for the review.

[Luigi77777]

It was ok...

This video wasn't as great as Hay Wars, you spent too much time with showing the ppl who were in it when you could have shown all of the ppls names at the same time. It was extremely short ( videowise ) because like I said before; you spent too much time with credits. But overall, I liked the idea of Snow Wars, and that you should build off all the videos you have involving the Whatever War series and eventually collaborate them all together to make just like a Wars Series Controller, like click one button to see this one etc. Anyways it was great but not to great. Better than what I could make so good job on this, I hope you make more Wars videos and good luck to any of you other flashes!

-Luigi77777

Fro responds:

Thanks for the review.

Like I said in the author comments this was just a trailer for Snow Wars so yeah it was just suppose to introduce the characters.

[Complete]

Nice turn from animation.

The quality was good for a newgrounds flash, and I reckon the youtube version is a lot better looking.

The sound added onto it.

Overall, I think this is a team that is destined to fail and by the end, will all be killed, maybe by each other.

Fro responds:

Ha, both teams were made up of the same people too. Paradox.

Thanks for the review.

[SpiffyMasta]

Review

I must first apologize for my previous reviews, even though it is hard to admit, they were obviously abusive.

I finally watched the whole thing, which I discovered was over only 30 seconds after I stopped watching the last time. It was still boring to me.

Things that need improvement.

If this is suppose to be in three parts, then you should submit all three parts, because there is not enough story in this part to grab my attention whatsoever. Maybe I would get it better if you had all three parts. I guess my sense of humor is not good enough, because I didn't think the jokes were funny, I thought they were obvious and tried too hard. The subtle art of comedy is a tough one to grasp.

As far as graphics go, you can barely see the "effects" you put in when you're shooting people. I don't know if you have these effects on the "higher quality" version, but this is a review on the version you submitted to this website. You need to look into a different lens or something if you're going to film in the snow, because the lighting is pretty bad at times, and maybe that's not your fault, but it makes hard to see at times.

Your sound was decent, the music was pretty much the only thing I liked, I thought it fit well. The menu was simple but pretty nice.

Overall I still give this a 3.

Fro responds:

No worries. Great review. You didn't have to change your score though. I was perfectly fine with the 0 you gave me. It had nothing to do with score just the review.

Ha, I knew you almost watched it all because it wasn't too much longer than 2 minutes.

The other two parts have well around 1,000 lasers that need to be drawn and edited. They won't be done for another year probably. That's how much work actually goes into these.

The newgrounds version completely fucked the effects. They look great on youtube though. For an example of better lasers watch the prequel to this called Hay Wars.

The camera was old, but that has nothing to do with video quality. The only reason it was that bad was because we had two choices for quality. The good quality was over 50 MB and this quality was the only one that was going to be small enough. We had to go with this one.

The sound was a great choice by my roommate.

Like I said, you could have kept your 0. I would have been perfectly fine with that.

Great review though. Can we put this all behind us now?