It might be better if I understood Polish...
But the captions were done well (though I wouldn't know if they are right). It all looked very good indeed. You should keep going; you have good talent.
Reviews for "Warsaw"
i don't get what the hell this means
but it made me smile
Pretty good
I like the way you drew all those buildings and the fact that it is both polished and set up atmosphere is a thing of beauty.
You have a lot of potential to take this site by storm and this first submission is better than so many higher scoring movies.
The subtitles were a nice addition since i'am an english speaking person.
I don't understand the situation in the polish cities so i don't know what your satirizing but i love it none the less because it is so artistic.
-PowerRangerYELLOW
Hashii responds:
Thank You :)
Hahahahahahaha!!!
Bardzo dobra praca za pierwszym razem
This being your first movie made kinda shocks me. you had beautiful drawings for a beginner in making flash movies. Let alone your story set Warsaw perfectly, I've been since im part polish myself :P . Anyways tips to improve
1) Use a preloader, go to newgrounds download section they have some
2) make a scene selection screen ( if you wanna get serious)
3) add in sound effects to jazz up your movie
4) have a little more movement frame by frame wise
other than that good job. you impressed me and i've been doing this for 7 years! Keep it Up!
Hashii responds:
Thank You for adwices :) I make riplay on the end but it isn't work :( I will try to correct this.