Too Long... But not bad
It looked great. The tom goes to the mayor influence went far beyond just the visuals... I felt like ranger could be "Tom" lol... very similar manerisms, voices, and facial expressions.
Some parts dragged on too long and got boring tho, but there were MANY hilarious parts as well. Great job. I enjoyed it.
Meh
I'd like to bang Paula Abdul.
Perfect if i was blind.
All the aspects in your flash are perfect except the animation. If you replaced the photoshopped pictures with some cartoons you would have some of the best shit on this site. Your comedy writing is dead on but the delivery of it is lacking cuz your animation is really poor. Dont get me wrong i thought alot of it was funny but i think the parts that were a little funny could be pure gold if you had some decent charachters acting it out, they probly could be pretty crude and your writing would still make up for it. Oh and the voice acting is probly some of the best around here on newgrounds. Usually that REALLY brings a flash down but yours is like dead on. Just drop the shitty animator you have right now and try to get so mone good to do it. Dont settle for "making decent shorts" pick up that one weakness and youll be creating som classics.
Not quite sure how to feel....
I'm a bit confused. Was your intent to emulate just the visual style of TGTTM, or also the Tim and Eric brand of humor? Now, I'm not saying you should be penalized for doing either one, because it's perfectly reasonable to take something as inspiration, but the problem, as I see it, is that the way T&E write and perform their comedy is so incredibly progressive and innovative that they themselves are the only ones with the mindsets capable of making it work.
But like I said, I can't tell from the context of the cartoon whether you were mostly trying to do your own thing or not. If I were to critique this simply based on what's here and nothing else, I'd actually compliment you on a solid script. The jokes could use some work, but the comedic timing on said jokes is actually pretty on-par with what I'm in to. My biggest gripe would probably be with the performances by the voice actors, which needs some work.
But yeah, just remember, when you create something that's undeniably similar to something else that's already out there, you're doomed to be endlessly compared to them, regardless of whether that's a good thing or a bad thing. And even though this is already similar to something that exists on television, in the context of Newgrounds.com, it's highly original because there's nothing else on this website like it.
So yeah, I guess my advise would be to keep it up, but don't hesitate to make changes to your own formula when you're making future episodes. In any case, it's refreshing to see there are other Tim and Eric fans out there.
interesting
I kinda liked it. Not bad. The style reminds of the AdultSwim show "Tom goes to the Mayor" only this is better (lol). There wasn't much animation but the style for this was cute. The beginning was funny but then it dragged on. You should work on the script alittle better. Overall, nice job and I want to see more. Keep it up :)