What Is THIS!
I need an explanation of how this game got such a rating when it's just a loading screen then a lady sitting with her hand on her desk. That doesn't make sense. Why is weighed at 2MB. Looks like this was only 50KB.
Reviews for "Sketched - Therapy"
YER GAY
I love the way each of the voices have an actual CONVERSATION with eachother. It is hard to do that with multiple voices hah. I thought you should have made the ending a bit more.. oh I dont know... explosive. As in have the guy get so angry he just goes insane and jumps out of the window while clinging the doctor with him. The ending you choose was funny as well though. ;) Great graphics! Sometimes the hands looked kind of strange, but I cant draw hands either. xD
I cant wait till the next episode! *P.S. do you need me to voice act? probably not since you will probably have more than 3 people since you are letting the winner of the VA competition voice act for this thing.*
sirjeffofshort responds:
Thanks man. We actually did have a few other alternate endings, including one where he hunted down the therapist and beat the hell out of him while he was eating lunch but it dragged on too long... plus I am lazy. Haha.
I think my problem with hands comes from the fact that I spent a long time studying the artwork of spanish influenced comic artists such as Humberto Ramos, and they have always drawn huge hands and feet, then when I try to translate that to the traditional "3 finger" cartoon hands they just look pudgy and awkward... That's probably way too in depth an excuse but oh well.
The next one should be out the first week of next month, and then the month after that will be our first annual guest spot cartoon (I'll PM you with the details later.)
Thanks for the review.
Funny
I liked it! That was hilarious. Poor dude locked up in that room... I wonder if he is still there.....
sirjeffofshort responds:
He is, but if you can find him and slip the necessary waiver under the door he would be much appreciative.
Well done
Story: 8 of 10
Quite unlike anything i have seen on newgrounds yet, and it put me in a good mode after i watched it. Also a nice detail where the doctor bites his lip.
A really good addition to the series imo.
Style: 7 of 10
Way above stickmen, thats good enough for me.
Sound: 10 of 10
Voices we're good, music in the testroom was spot on.
Best regards h0vSa
sirjeffofshort responds:
Wow, thanks for the awesome breakdown. We put a lot of time and effort into these shorts so it's really nice when someone puts a little extra time into their reviews. Thanks again.
Pretty good
You know I have to love your stuff. It's like my birth right and If I don't Bill will call me up drunk. But anyway I was kinda wondering where it was going other then it was just about being really awkward unless that was the whole point.
Love,
Canada
sirjeffofshort responds:
It's sketch comedy Canada, that's how these things work. Haha. Thanks for the review man.