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Reviews for "My first Flash game :D"

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Impossible! This cannot be your VERY first game!? It's too GOOD! :D
Keep up the good work man!

I actually found it fun!

Now, I'm afraid I went into this game rather skeptical. "Oh, god, another pathetic arrow keys + space bar stickman jumping game". But it was actually very, very good for a first attempt.

The level design was intuitive and good fun, the little hints were well-made and useful, and the art, although basic, was very good, complimenting the rather basic nature of the game. However, I would recommend a couple of things: First, make the music loop. I actually really enjoyed it, but when it stopped and was nowhere to be found, it made the game a fair bit more boring.

Second, make it longer. You've done all the hard parts! Just stretch it out a little longer, add a basic plot, perhaps a tutorial level for a new feature. Also, I'd recommend making the plant climbing a little easier. When I wasn't getting stuck on the roof of the leaf above, I was plummeting to the start again, and (spoilers) add having to keep my mouse on the plant and it became quite frustrating.

Lastly, for God's sake, give it a better title! :D.

Honestly, you're ALMOST there, I could easily see an upgraded version of this, with a story and all, on the frontpage. Good luck!

ANNOYING AS FUCK

man i almost snapped my keyboard cos of the beanstalk bit, i could keep the cursor on it but during that bit where it's just going left and right platforms i kept falling and it was because you have to wait like 2 seconds when you hit a platform to jump again which is retarded, other than that i liked it and if you make the controls better and fix things other people have said it'll be a good game (the water bit was kinda pointless though.

Not bad for a first

There were some problems, like the beanstalk thing, you shoulda made it into sections and put a time switch instead, cause keeping the mouse on it was just to tedious. Also, the platfroms were a bit transparent and also were easy do fall through. The jumping could also have been better because i found myself bouncing from platfrom to platform, then falling... a lot.

Pretty Tais

Beanstalk was really annoying but it was fun to play.The Music cut off on me though which kinda killed the mood.