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Reviews for "My first Flash game :D"

Not bad!

For your very first flash game, this is very good! One suggestion would be to loop the music instead of it going to nothing but silence after a while. Also just keep practicing and learning more and more to improve with Flash. You've definitely got the potential!

Amazing First Game

I felt as if I were playing a cross between Super Mario and Pac-Man Adventures and this was an absolutely fantastic first try. The most important thing is that you were able to create an enjoyable atmosphere, something which few flash artists are able to do. Your use of the mouse was very innovative and made this game really stand out.

The next step for you is to work on the clipping and fundamental issues related to the terrain. For example, walking up and down slopes was a little choppy/glitching because I suspect that you made them as stairs and drew over them. Another minor issue was the size of the bubbles and fonts for signs which often went off screen. Also, I personally loved the music but it is always a good idea to give volume and music controls.

If you focus on polishing up those aspects, adding some more direction and challenges, this will be a great game. Keep up the good work!

Vakoto responds:

Thanks, I'll be sure to keep this all in mind when I make a newer, better game. I'll have plenty of time to work on it too :) When I presented this in class most thought it was like, a 2D version of Super Mario Galaxy. It gave me another cool Idea to use the cursor XD

Wow...

Really good but the beanstalk ruins it all. Got to the very top and fell like 6 times. The problem is the jumping. You have to have it PERFECT or you fall. and its easy to over, under, or double jump all of which fuck you over. Also sometimes I'd get half way on and just slide right off..

Nice Game!

Great game, it took me about 10 minutes to get over the bridge though, :)

-Red Wolf

c'mon everyone!

your all saying that the entire game sucks just because of the beanstalk, well;
a: its a challenge, i like that
b: its not so hard just to keep your mouse one the thing