huh?
i don't get it at all.. made no sense to me, it was random, but not in a funny and/or good way.
nice try, but it definitely has room for improvements.
Reviews for "Marco the Magnificent"
Confusing
The art was kinda cool, but it didn't have a plot or any real entertainment value aside from a little eye candy. It was creepy (which i assume you were going for), mostly due to the mentally challenged eunuch (the man's proportions and weird goatee suggest he is an adult, yet his voice sounds almost childlike, if the goatee was supposed to be a shadow it shouldn't be triangular and that big, if the man was indeed supposed to be a man, his voice should be deeper and his proportions more childlike). Who is the evil being messing with the retarded man, and why does the plant come to life? Is it possessed by the evil narrator thing? Is the retarded man having a retarded dream induced by his psychotherapy drugs? This isn't really funny or dramatic or... Well, frankly it's not cute, just creepy as I said. The plant eating him seems pointless and half-baked, like a "I don't know where I'm going with this flash so I'll wrap it up with a half-assed ending" kind of deal. You have a decent amount of artistic talent, but you need more creativity. Try making something of substance with a plot or something cause I bet you could make something good.
kaav responds:
Starting from your last comment, I believe it takes more creativity to create content without the 'standard' plot. The protagonist is not a man but a teenage boy, and yes it is a goatee. The plant character is the tangible form of the interviewer who may have wished to consume the boy from the very beginning. The boy is not retarded, he is merely a juvenile innocent. However, fair enough that you did not like it, that's your opinion. Thank you for your comment.
no. err...no
what.
didn't get this at all...blargh.
drawings were good i guess
Marco
Marco doesn't have down syndrome and isn't retarded, he's just really dumb.
Ha!Ha!
Someone below me aked if he has downs! HAHAHAHHA!!!!!