50%
it was ok.
Reviews for "Marco the Magnificent"
Uh...
It was so short that I can't even right a review!
what was the point of this flash?
what were you trying to get people to think out of this. was there some type of feeling or comedy of this. if im being ignorant on the plot of this then please respond to this and let me know what this was supposed to be. and great sound and animation. i like the leave things on a light note.
oh my fucking god
why is newgrounds suddenly filled with crap?
I mean, not completely, but for this to be on the front page...
If anyone needs advice, which people propably don't think they need, here it is:
Plainly making your flash weird, doesn't make it cool, or stylish. If something sucks, and you give it a weird twist, chances are, it'll turn out as crappy as you started out.
Put your effort into something better
It wasn't terrible, but neither was it good.
You need to work on the writing a lot, it need to have a purpose, if not a purpose you must aim on getting the viewer in a mood, it need to have an effect on the viewer.
I read the description and you wanted us to find the character cute. It kinda felt like a kid with adhd (not trying to bash people with ahd though) more than cute.
Put your effort into something better, you have the skill to make something great but you need to use it in the right way.