real!
omg TWO of those creatures are real i saw them
Reviews for "Abyssal"
Wicked
Very creative. The whole time, I was picturing him thousands of leagues under the sea. To the point of pitch black, no sound, and those creatures would be the kinds of things you would see.
Very creative
wow, very creative and abstract creatures. they were so bizarre dude. it seems is if this was an actual dream you've had before.
Twat. lol.
Cool as hell, though I would love to see a plot expand from this (obviously not your intention the first time around)
I though everything was great, though some of the creatures are kinda been-done (only some)... All was well up untill the hairy pussy lips. That's a massive cliche by now, man. xD
Scythemantis responds:
I wasn't even thinking of them that way really, just an eyeless face with long hair and a big mouth :p
Interresting
... vision of hell.