Hmm..
to be honest, i wasn't impressed by this. Yeah the animation was good in places (by places, i mean when he was sliding down the street) but apart from that i'd say it's quite an average piece. Front page, must have been a slow day IMO.
Try to work more on the selection of shots used and drawing from different angles, at the moment it's all pretty "been there, done that" to be honest.
Not bad by any means, just sloppy in places. It looks a bit like you were rushing this towards the end to push it out on time.