Nice!
Excellent use of suspense.
Reviews for "Jitters"
nice, very inventive
i must say i really enjoyed this flash, sir. the beginning was fine for a start, and the middle was delightfully creepy, and it eventually built up to an ending that may be disappointing to the grim and soulless, but as for the rest of us normal human beings with nostalgic memories of fear exhibited by the main character, wrapped up very nicely. my one concern is that it didn't have much to do with christmas, except when you flashed "Merry Christmas" in the ending credits, but that doesn't belittle this fine submission in any way.
Twist responds:
Actually, the reason I had his paranoia brought on by heat was because I wanted the end to be a surprise. The water he gets is a christmas present, you can even see a tree behind him when he gets it.
nice
it reminds us all, that in the end, theres really nothing to be afraid of.
it reminds me
of something that when you over think a situation and get all hyped up then in the end its not bad at all
something you and I cant do
and thats make someone walk.. LOL its not nothing bad actually I'm just glad someone shares my struggle! LOL you do the same thing i do... and thats forget to bend the knees right!!! :P over all good short I mean story i kind of got he had a weird dream... i get thoughs some freaky random shit dreams... I do wanna ask what animation program you use though... i use artoonix.. but over all..
animation 6/10
story 7/10
art work 8/10
effort 9/10
sound effects 9/10
everything else 8/10
overall 8/10