not bad.
quick and snapy humor. very unexpected. running scene could have been shorter but nice end joke. keep it up.
not bad.
quick and snapy humor. very unexpected. running scene could have been shorter but nice end joke. keep it up.
Thanks, I think the running scene is just long enough. I did that so you could here the song and get the feel of the movie.
Deeply Disturbing
This is by far one of the creepiest videos I've ever seen in my life. The art style and the whistling... Oh the whistling... I think I felt my hear stop when it showed Charlie's face for the first time. Okay, in terms of constructive criticism, I don't have much to say. I don't really know what the point of the video was. I guess you could improve the animation a little, esp. for the shop keeper. At times, he'd go silent and I'd think the video is broken or it's simply short, but then he'd begin talking again. Otherwise, all I can say is I didn't really like it and it's very, very creepy.
I posted in the info that in one part he pauses for too long but the rest is normal. This video was supposed to make charlie look like he was oblivious to the world around him. The whistling was supposed to be the music, but it turned out that Charlie only thought that was how it sounded, but he was making the whistleing himself. The slugworth part was just funny and weird. Grandpa joe shouldn't have been able to walk from being in bed for so many years. Just summing it up for ya.