Wicked =)
I love the story so far, the music fits nicely
only things that bother me is the voice acting at times and the animation. Much improvement from the first one tho =)
Keep it up! looking forward to #IIIV =D
Reviews for "Exile Preliminary 3"
NICe
I LOVE IT! Can't wait for the next episode! (:
Charming series, but same issues
I like this series, it's fun to watch. The fights are animated frame-by-frame, which is rare, the story's organized and the dialog is reletively realistic. It doesn't feel all stilted and scripted, which is really appreciated on this end.
However, the animation is still a little bit unpleasant. The way the characters move is really strange looking and doesn't flow well. The characters morph into their movements like clay instead of moving into them. Also, the linework and anatomy still seem a bit sloppy to me, but keep working at it, man, you're improving.
RiverJordan responds:
Hey thanks for the review! I appreciate it and i'll try to work more on character flow, im still a bit new to FBF but i'll really put more into that category in the next one.
Sweet man
Its been good watching you get better as you do more of these, keep it up!
You had some wicked shots in there, things to try and improve on are your linework and some of your anatomy... not saying its bad, just critique :)
cool alot better
this is better than the 2nd with animation, with scrip, and its also a bit longer than usual ^_^