good sprite movie
it was well animated, and flowed verry well, but the fights felt a bit slow and jerky, but it didint bring my opinon of it down, teh music was awsome as well
good sprite movie
it was well animated, and flowed verry well, but the fights felt a bit slow and jerky, but it didint bring my opinon of it down, teh music was awsome as well
awesome
Awesome but in part 2 can we press the spacebar for the next line? its to fast
ok.
the story was... interesting, you have to improve your skills at sprites, then i would love to see the remake of this video :)
shows potential
i'm hoping that you have fireworks or a similar program, because if you use transparency sprites, it will help the visual look a bit. some practice will also help you get used to using some of the more advanced tricks of flash. the story at least stays away from the cliche "mario vs sonic for no reason other than console rivalry" thing. if you work on your skills, both as a writer and as a flash artist, you could produce some truly great material. i'm looking forward to seeing your future works!
You show potenital.
The story was pretty good, and could turn into something really awesome. There were a few gramatical errors, and sometimes the text was hard to read. Also, yeah, the frame by frame thingy needs some work.
And your text wasn't too fast, if anything, everyone else's is too slow. Then again, I read reeeeeeeally fast.