pretty good.
you keep at it and you'll do well. its good even tho it's not finished. so yeah. keep at it.
Reviews for "Death Note ending demo"
cool demo
Visuals: great picture, very well drawn and animated, I liked the old movie effect, though I'm not entirely sure how this will be used in a full version
Audio: goes great with the video, I'm assuming it's from Death Note, and I just plain liked it
Overall: cool little short, great picture and audio, as this is a demo I expect the finished product to be even better
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Comments before actual review - I never heard of Death Note. >.<
Animation/Graphics - Did you do the drawing here? If you did it was done very nicely. The graphics were perfectly fine here, but the animation was just.. kind of weird I guess. Kind of jumpy and everything.
Story - I guess I just don't really understand what was going on here at all. Is it going to be used as some sort of credits? I wouldn't want to just use this as an ending to a submission by itself.
Audio - The audio went very well with the animation itself. Again, I'm assuming audio used in Death Note or whatever it is that you are making a flash about. So it's going to be a good fit naturally.
Overall - An alright ending, but I would add scrolling credits to it off to the side or something and probably wouldn't use this as an ending in itself.
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OK, it's only a demo. That's a good excuse that the flash was pretty short and didn't offer that much (just a picture and a song).
The drawing was done pretty well and I also liked the "old movie effect", even though it was a tad bit over the top (maybe use thinner vertical lines).
Overall, you showed some nice skills in this short flash.
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You've got the start
Now that you've got the image drawn and a few overlays of the frames to make it look antiquated, it's a nice start of the project. Sadly, it is a little short and I think that you could take it further, with the obvious idea being to take this song to completion, showing us what you're capable of, as I don't think you've reached a ceiling yet.
The other thing is to not just manipulate one picture - have some other bits and pieces moving about - how about a band playing in front of the main image - I've seen that one used effectively with some mainstream videos. Even if you just stick in a few stick figures, you'll give it much more depth and it would look so much better. This would give you a video that does much more justice to the track.
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