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OK, it's only a demo. That's a good excuse that the flash was pretty short and didn't offer that much (just a picture and a song).
The drawing was done pretty well and I also liked the "old movie effect", even though it was a tad bit over the top (maybe use thinner vertical lines).
Overall, you showed some nice skills in this short flash.
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Comments before actual review - I never heard of Death Note. >.<
Animation/Graphics - Did you do the drawing here? If you did it was done very nicely. The graphics were perfectly fine here, but the animation was just.. kind of weird I guess. Kind of jumpy and everything.
Story - I guess I just don't really understand what was going on here at all. Is it going to be used as some sort of credits? I wouldn't want to just use this as an ending to a submission by itself.
Audio - The audio went very well with the animation itself. Again, I'm assuming audio used in Death Note or whatever it is that you are making a flash about. So it's going to be a good fit naturally.
Overall - An alright ending, but I would add scrolling credits to it off to the side or something and probably wouldn't use this as an ending in itself.
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Good...
but could be better if you cut up the furst sceene. It stayed on ot long. Keep up the good work.
-Flashplane
yeah, this is great
Try modifing the eyes, i remember it was looking to a side, not to a center. anyway its a cool drawing you made by being learning.
pretty good.
you keep at it and you'll do well. its good even tho it's not finished. so yeah. keep at it.