needs sound
Visuals: what is drawn is good, the animating needs some work, the way you have it now makes it look choppy, keep practicing
Audio: anything is better than nothing
Overall: needs sound and to be a bit longer, after that focus on getting the animation up to par
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Thanks, I'll be sure to add some audio next time!
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Meh, this is highly disappointing. The animations are kinda rough, the graphics aren't that good either. The lack of sound is pretty annoying.
All in all, the flash looks very rushed (and it was indeed). I would suggest that you put more time and more effort into this project before submitting it.
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Thanks for the review, next time I will spend more time on it :)!
Hey there.
(Honest score on review because it came through the RRC)
Animation/Graphics - I don't want to sound like I'm just repeating people here, but it's the only thing that I can really think of to improve on is exactly what Bezman was talking about. The animation was just a tad slow and a little skippy. It could of been much smoother. When the blood was coming out it just didn't look like blood. Try and make it look a little bit more like the blood on the madness animations. Just doing this part would increase the rating on my review by quite a bit.
Story - Almost starts off like the flash that I wrote for you. ;) So it looks like you have been practicing and you are getting much better at animating. It's only a matter of time before you get pretty good at it so keep up the good work. I can't comment on how short it was because you were just making a short one on purpose, but I hope if you ever get to our flash that you can make it so the choices are more of the style like how to choose which way to kill the bad guys and which direction to go, etc.. I thought when the bullets hit the wall and stuff that they should of created bullet holes instead of bouncing off and such.
Audio - Again, I understand that you did this in a hurry, but it really needed some background music let alone some sound effects. The addition of this would of also increased the rating of my review by quite a bit.
Overall - You still have quite a way to go, but everyone starts from somewhere and it looks like your starting off in the right direction so keep up the good work and I hope you improve next time around.
C52
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Thanks Corky, you really helped! Your review showed me that just because it's a short, doesn't mean I have to be quick about making it! Actually yeah, please don't give away the script, I hope to get really good soon and make it in time for the next Mandess Day! Please re-send it to me if you can and I'll save it on my desktop as it is stuck in my PM box :(!
I've also learned zooming and scrolling (V CAM).
Thanks for the tips about the bullet holes and other, I'll use it!
PM me sometime too :) THANKS FOR GIVING ME A REAL REVIEW CORKS ;)
Disappointing.
I wouldn't really call it interactive - I mean, it's a short movie with a scene select at the end.
If it's gonna be a choose-your-adventure type thing, then I can only wish you the best of luck. You've got a fair bit of work to go.
I feel your animation was a bit slow - the movement of the bullets and the characters seemed stilted. You could maybe consider your pacing a bit more.
The way the blood 'disappears' looks odd - after shooting out of the guys, it should just come to a stop in some sort of pool. Definitely not 'go back into their head' like it seems to do when the 2 dudes in the 2nd room fall down.
I liked the blood sprays with the dudes in the 2nd room when the bullet hit them. Just redo the ending few frames.
I feel let down by this, but best of luck for future stuff.
Hey thanks :) What I've taken from your review is increase the frame rate and add more frames in between the movements (which I will do, thanks) and work more on the finishing position of blood! Thanks :)
lol
nice, lol havent talked to u in a while, nice to
Wow I know it's been long!!
How are you?!? Give me a PM sometime!
Haha thanks for the 10!