Spectacular
Awesome! Anna looked alot like Rukia from bleach in the first close-up shot.
Reviews for "Don't Leave"
Jestercap13 responds:
yeah i based her off of her. i thought it would be ok. :/
Flawed but watchable
Starting with the bad, or at least not particularly good:
* Mouth animation needs some work
* General movement animation also not great
* You need someone to proofread your script - someone who will both fix grammatical errors (there's a difference between "your" and "you're"), and tell you when the dialogue doesn't work, because a few of the sentences in there needed some tidying up
Now, the good:
* Nice art style
* Good choice of music
* Voice actors did well
* Story was not mind-blowingly amazing, but was good enough to keep me watching
Jestercap13 responds:
thank you thats what i thought to, this is just kind of a test or practice.
just beautiful
very well animated, good choice of soundtrack and a sad but beaultiful story
Jestercap13 responds:
thank you
Awwwwwwwww
that was some quite beautiful animation!
great stuff!
Jestercap13 responds:
thanks
Nice work
I like this work, good draw, smooth animation, sad history.... OK, but I have a doubt.
What is doing Rukia here? Hehehehe....
Jestercap13 responds:
i based the character one her, but bleh. dont think im bad or anything. :[