Reviews for Don't Leave

[flamingsquirl]

Pretty good

pretty good. The girl in the first two shots looks like a Rukia clone though. The newgrounds poster in the guys room i felt detracted from the overall seriousness of the film. Also, There is one scene that is in blaring contrast with the rest. The top down view of the guy before he gets hit by the car was totally different style wise and didn't match the rest of the production. IMHO

now on a positive note, the voice acting i thought was very good, if a little quite, and the music accented it very well. The art was very stylish, and the almost noir look complimented the other parts well. Music was a bit loud for the voices used though and was a bit overpowering

[Kenryoku]

My thanks to you

...for a great role, and the other thing we discussed in our e-mails.
Smooth animations, appropriate music and *ahem* good voice acting and line mixing. If you'd like some assistance at figure drawing, you have my e-mail. I've been drawing since I could hold a crayon (even though I'm not good at flash yet) and I would gladly lend you some assistance if you need it, though your animations are really very good. Hope to work with you again.

Jestercap13 responds:

alright sounds good, thanx for voiceing in my animation. i to have been drawing since i could hold a crayon to, im jsut better at drawing on paper than on the computer lol.

[geco-deco12]

Awesome.

Really good, i'm looking forward to your next animation. I have been practising with mouth movements a bit, the tutorial that helped the most is http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /108060
Its really handy, it showed me not to put every letter in one frame, like the letter i could take 3 frames (depending on the frame rate)

Jestercap13 responds:

hmn.. yeah thats right. tahnx for watching

[djleeroy]

Nice

Not bad but I feel there could have been more animation rather than fade outs and tweens. The direction was pretty good and the mood was well set. You do need to work on your drawing skills. Work on the human form and stop using traces from official works. I noticed the first view of the girl was basically Rukia from Bleach and others I think were of Orihime. You won't get any better from tracing. References are fine and perfectly ok. Use pictures of real people and get a feel of how the human form looks.

Jestercap13 responds:

thank you, i thought it would be a bad idea, i just had problems finding real people that fit the stlye but my next animation i will make sure is alot more original.

[Scatmn64]

i liked it

good animation, good voice acting, not the best story i've eer seen, but i liked it anyway.

Jestercap13 responds:

thank you