It was alright
The animation could have been better and the sound quality was poor. However it did have a few funny moments and overall was pretty entertaining.
Reviews for "Criminal!"
Much to say
First, i am not fond of stick guys. It doesnt mean that a stick flash can't be great, but a stick flash needs some serious content to make up for the lack of attractiveness. A stick flash must provide smthg outstanding, or it's just a proof of laziness.
Yours is poorly animated. No fluidity.
Each time a character speak, you can just hear a low quality microphone being activated. It feels as if I was on the phone with a guy in a car during a storm.
Finally, this flash is pure random. But catch me well there : Pure randomness with no apparent quality is bad randomness. You have to give your flash an outstanding element to magnify the "feel of random" you want to give. That's why the kind of flash you made here can be just two things : epic, or crappy.
Yours have nothing to make it valuable. I give one beacause of the funny faces. That's what I would have give if this flash was only a succesion of three pics with these faces.
Give your flash a unique feature, an eye catching element. Give it smthg really worth it. Then, it maybe could become smthg enjoyable.
Congrats
Nice little story, nothing outrageously funny,
at a guess it feels like you werent too bothered about this project, or your skills at animating arent yet that developed,
if its the latter this is a great example of how you dont need to be amazing at art and flash to put out a decent piece of work.
however if its the former, it goes to show what practice can do for you.
anyway, good job, but could be a little smoother
4/10
c'mon
Funny moments but not that great of an effort.
I really did.
I wanted to enjoy it. But I'm sad to say that this is not front page material, the animating poor, the audio recording was poor, and the scream just sounded choppy and not well recorded. I'm giving you a 2 because the story might have been good if the animating and sound weren't as bad. You have some good idea's, but please try and work on the quality of the video as well.