Not bad
The music's cool and appropriate. The storyline is ok. A little work on the graphics. I like the originality overall.
Reviews for "Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 7"
Jimtopia responds:
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.
haha
haha love the ending
Jimtopia responds:
I like the ending a lot more now.
awesome!!!!!
This is so awsome man at every of episode it gets better and better!! and you still respond to reviews AWESOME!!!!!!11!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11!
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Jimtopia responds:
I always respond to reviews because you guys rock!
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Thoroughly enjoyable. Good level of humour, good use of music too. My only 'problem' is on the visual side of things, I would like to see an improvement on the ole basic shapes + gradients + motion tweens. I'm not saying you should spend months on end practising frame-by-frame stuff, just improve what you've already got. Some suggestions:
- Highlights in the hair
- A mouth (basic)
- Change of hands, upgrade them slightly, perhaps "closed fist" shape.
- Eyebrows (for better facial expressions)
- Character Shadow
- Top shapes, ie... T-shirt for a t-shirt, hoody for a hoody. Same style as what you've got, just adding more shape.
I'll leave that at that. Look forward to more.
Jimtopia responds:
I have tried pretty much every one of your suggestions, and honestly Jim and his pals do not need to be improved (though I do think hair highlights are a definite possibility).
Oh dear!
I couldn't stop laughing after Jim's hand was flung across the screen. Although the downside to the animation was the lack of sound fx, but besides that well done!
Jimtopia responds:
Some sound effects are quite hard to find it turns out.