funny
it was funny and i dot really see any problems
Reviews for "Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 7"
Jimtopia responds:
Cool, glad you liked it.
hehe lol
that was cool...
Jimtopia responds:
Thanks
Alright
Personally, I'm not too keen on this one to be honest, I mean it is okay but there are a few things I would have rather seen in this, I would have found it much funnier if he started to chew through the gum. I know that would also be kind of disgusting, lol, but it would have amused me personally which is all I'm thinking of here.
The ending is also kind of bleh to me, I was expecting him to crash into something or someone, like one of the girls who has appeared in some of your other flash, that might have been a bit more amusing. Those are just my ideas anyway, this is okay and the timing of the ending is good, so nice work on that, also you have the hand joke in this again, which is clever to see, just don't over use it.
4/5
<3
Jimtopia responds:
Let me just say that this one in particular I didn't think through, and as a result I can tell that it suffered a bit, and on some of your points I agree. The reason I didn't have Jim chew the gum though, is because he doesn't have a mouth, and it would have been difficult to show what he's doing. I also didn't want this to end up too much like RTIL's cartoon "GUM" (http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/vie w/381169).
Concerning the ending, to use an old saying, I "wrote myself into a corner." I made this flash as I went along, and when you do that, you're not really focusing on the ending, you're focusing on making it funny wherever you're at in the animation. Looking back now, I regret having not thought through it before I did the flash (at least) but hey, you win some, you lose some.
I admit that I kind of dropped the ball on this one. I'll make sure not to let that happen again.
~Jimtopia
cool
it was funny when he lost his hand by gum
Jimtopia responds:
Thanks.
Oh Jim and his hands...
Not bad this one, i think the music is what really made this work.
The animation was pretty good too...
-Tom
Jimtopia responds:
The music was just a random thing I decided to throw in, I'm glad it worked out so well.