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Reviews for "Beneath the Sheets"

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<instert youtube comment here> :P

So, now we got that out the way, on with the review.

It's a nice movie with a good script. I liked how you parodied various "ghost movies" here.

I think the ghost was very funny, especially when he fell down. I would like to see that in a movie that runs in the cinema, heh.

Also, the camera man/narrator was very good. He was good to understand (which is mandatory if you want to know what's going on ^^) and also his acting was pretty good.

{ Review Request Club }

Fro responds:

<Insert Angry Youtube Response Here>

Yeah, my friend is a great actor. A lot better then I am. I didn't have much to act though since I had a sheet over my face and my only lines were SON OF A BITCH and Boooooo. Thanks for the review.

This should be on YouTube... LOL

Not a bad little offering here - much better than your Hay Wars submission, as the video quality has improved a lot - moving the camera around less has helped this a lot.

I like the way that you added the extra footage of the ghost moving around after the first few pieces of footage. What I would have done is a quick trace and put a barely noticeable image over the top of the video, so the really eagle eyed viewers could see that you were actually putting a ghost in there. What you need is to make it almost imperceptible, just like they do in things like 'Most Haunted' or any of those other fake ghost shows.

Punchline was nice as well - will we see a sequel to this at all? Dammit, someone's drunk all of my beer again! or something along those lines...

[Review Request Club]

Fro responds:

Believe it or not the video quality was worse, but we got rid of that by making it darker in the house and not having too much light around. It was so dark that you couldn't tell that it was bad quality. A sequel? Not anytime soon with us going to different colleges in about a week. I was thinking about how to make a sequel just in case though and I think it would turn out good. It won't be for awhile though. Anything coming from me in the near future will actually be flash. Thanks for the review.

THIS SHOULD BE ON YOUTUBE!

No, just kidding. This was a pretty unique video. Live action videos are cool for a change to see on Newgrounds and this is no exception. Maybe adding a scene selector/fast forward button would be a good idea, so we can skip to the good parts.

7/10
~ Z
REVIEW REQUEST CLUB

Fro responds:

Perhaps I will try to do that next time. I don't know how, but I'm sure I can get someone to help me figure it out. Thanks for the review.

Lol

Lol, pretty funny. It reminded me of the first knox movie. Anyway, I thought it was quite funny. My main complaint is that in some scenes it was a bit too dark. If they were used for dramatic effect, I guess that's ok, but sometimes it was just too dark to see the action.
But it still made me laugh, it was very silly.
;)

Fro responds:

Yeah it shows up darker on the computer than it does on the camera so we didn't until too late.

Thanks for the review.

Not Bad...

As a video I can't really judge you for artwork or animation, but I can judge you on other things. The video work was done in an awkward way while you were running due to it being dark, it would've been nice if you invested in some night vision. As for the ghost scenes... they were comical, but you could've done more for something with a ghost in comedy.

|| Good Points ||
(Artwork Points Disabled)
(Animation Points Disabled)
*Great Story
*Quite Funny

|| Bad Points ||
*Awkward Camera Work At Times

Fro responds:

The camera was suppose to represent what you would get in real life if you had a situation like this. Night vision would be pretty cool though. :) Perhaps if I had a job I would invest in that.

Future ghost episodes will be funnier/have more story.