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Reviews for "Muscle Bird"
Hm....
AMBIVALENCE TIME!!!
Artwork was pretty good, clean and tidy and generally well set out for the flash. Sound was acceptable, if a little quiet overall. In terms of technical presentation, this was pretty well made. I can't argue with anything about its looks.
However, the 'plot', or more specifically, 'the point' was lost quickly, and it didn't do much more than make me go 'Uh, what?' after a few minutes. No doubt, a few obvious laughs were there, but it just wasn't -THAT- funny.
Dating video joke was a good idea, but it seemed a little forced for the humour. Think about how to go about this (hell, even watch some piss-poor dating vids for inspiration) and make it funnier, and you'll get more than six stars.
No bullshit, no flaming, no nonsense.
I calls 'em as I sees 'em.
Harvey Birdman
This is like Harvey Birdman or any other Short show u would Watch on Adult Swim!(In other words Good Animation but SHITTY ass Humor) You have Good Talent bro u could make wayyy better...How Ever i think this Deserved Front page b/c your Very Talented!
lack.
the combination of the length and scattered humor threw me off.
could have been way better if some deeper comedy had been involved.
Decent.
Waarde4, i think when the animation was unstable it was soposed to be the camcorder, because you know how home movies are, and i like how this animator incorperated this into the film, i also thought the idea was rather creative and i hope to see more dating videos for other imaginitive animal-like characters. I give most of the points to the animator for being creative, making it look difrent weather or not it was being seen through the camcorder or actualy seeing them. I give the person who came up with the idea high props as well, the idea was firm and creative, however the lines lost points for both the animator and the person who sparked this idea... while the dialouge fit the video only one of the lines really jumped out and grabbed me and was the line about not pumping him up with the other things body builders used... and the only reason i remember that is because right after that was the animation of him pecking the steriods. Thats bad because the only thing really drawing me to this is the animation, which was created by the idea.... also sorry for being a critic, i know i myself havnt made any flash videos (due to not having the thousand or so needed to by the softwear to create flashes)... so i have no right to critic, still giving my input is what i do best. Either way this was decent and i look forward to the next one.