Reviews for Muscle Bird

[WarpZone]

Moderately funny dating tape parody.

It's not as funny as those Mad TV dating tape sketches, but it's all right. I found the whole Muscle Bird character kinda dull. Most of the humor is observational, and kinda stale if you've ever seen any other parodies of dating tapes before.

I would have liked to see more of an effort to draw humor from the ridiculousness of the character. One bright moment was when he started pecking up the steroids, hehehe. But I think there was potential for more Bird Humor, here. (For one thing, burds have hollow bones. What would that be like for a stuntman? :) )

I suppose I should be grateful you made a furre flash that was only minimally creepy. I'll take a look at your other work. You clearly know your way around Flash, and you're willing to work hard on the story, humor, and character design. Even though my personal reaction to this flash was lukewarm, I can tell you're a great animator.

I look forward to your future works. Keep experimenting, keep trying. I'm sure you'll blow me away with one of your submissions. It just wasn't this one.

BorrisMoose responds:

Thanks for the in- depth review dude, it will be really helpful when working on future submissions.

[CrusaderLord]

Donka-Wonka-Voiceacting!

Graphics: 7/10
Voices: 10/10
Music: 10/10
Overall: 7/10

The voiceacting was perfect, i really loved it. But the animation could have used SOME work. All and all, it was quite boring, but it had twists and turns so it kept me watching. Shortly, good flash, some good points from me.

Hakilodokili-Mandokir,
CrusaderLord

7/10, 4/5.

BorrisMoose responds:

Cheers for the review, I miss the grading criteria that used to be in place.

[gordo1920]

ok..

nice little flash and all
but didnt find much humor in it..

just work on the jokes and stuff and itll be cool

[sandhog]

this could be of legendary proportions

if ya keep up this good flashes and make more''
this could be indeed legendary.

[Vreoc]

Constructive Criticism

The star points I added to this review were strictly for the animator of this clip. I found the idea very funny though, but as it dragged on, the korny lines and events kinda took the magic away. If i may suggest shortening this and trimming the lines down (remember you dont have to use it all). Other than that excellent job visually and animation wise.