Awesome
I like it. I like it. I LIKE IT. Fantastic piece my friend. if i were to hear this in concert I would give you a standing audition. I never give tens on music unless it sends and good message, and creates an image of something in ones mind. This takes the cake, and i can say it is better than many of my pieces...
Beutiful
it made me smile and that means a lot to me i haven't had much to smile about for the past three years.
Overall very good
Excellent overall. Loved it. Two things I would suggest: (1) The "left hand" is super predictable-- you could make a huge overall impact if you mixed it up from the standard root, chord, chord. Arpeggios in a couple sections or something. (2) The ending could be much stronger.
Like I said though, overall great piece.
Totally agreed. I usually just run with a melodic idea and use a basic functional left hand, and then rush to finish the piece. Hopefully, as I get better at piano, I'll be able to write more complex parts quicker. Or spend more time editing and revising a piece.
Thanks for the pointed review!
mad skillz
just beuitifull