AMAZING!
Can I use this in a film I'm making? It's pretty small-time, but it will be good.
Keep it up! :D
Reviews for "Snow Waltz"
OcularNebula responds:
Ah, yes, of course! Sorry I didn't respond earlier - I didn't realize there was a review on this one, you should have PMed me. Anyway, as long as proper credit is given to me, feel free to use any of my music!
I Say...
I say, This piece is quite exquisite. It reminds me of a nice dreamy dawn on the balcony gallery in the snow. I really feel a warm smile form on my face when listening to it. Thanks for making my day. :)
Nice (:
I really liked this piece. I enjoy good piano music and this one is no exception. Impressive composition. Keep up the good work. And try OysterHippopotamus' suggestion for your next piano piece (:
Good melody
You have a good ear for melody. I do agree with skyood, however, that the left hand isn't as good as it could be. However, I don't think you need to get rid of the standard 'oom-pah-pah' figure in the bass that is so common to waltzes. You simply need to re-harmonize the piece so that in the left hand, the first note of every measure forms a clear melody. Use inverted chords and change the harmony where you have to in order to make a memorable *and singable* bass line. Try to make this melody go in the opposite direction of your right hand as often as possible.
If you do this your music will sound very interesting and 'full' (not to mention impressive). You will have a good melody in your right hand, a countermelody in the bassline (beat 1 of every measure) and a chordal accompaniment (beats two and three of every measure).
Good luck.
Good one!
As the title says!