Nice.
I like martial arts and ninjas so this was pretty awesome. 1 pt off for the animation though I did like something that I just can't point out...
Reviews for "NINJA#4"
I wish
I wish I could do flash that well but your awesome
Hmmmm.
I have really mixed feelings about this cartoon!!
On the one hand, the art is beautiful. Your personal style is very evident, and everything is extremely cleanly drawn. So A+ on that.
But on the other hand I really despised the music, and the animation was bugging me for some reason. Did you make this with a really low framerate? It looks like it's almost 12FPS or something. I thought it was lag at first, but even at low resolution it still was like that. Try doing 24-30FPS, and it'll look a lot more fluid.
ANYWAYS - You obviously are very talented, and have a great skill set to make some amazing videos. Just a few tweaks here and there and it'll be perfect :P
Great work! Needs polish
I think your style of art is great, and very well suited for Flash, and while you generally seem to have a good eye for cinematic punch there were a few things that killed it for me. The biggest thing throughout was the slow-motion; it was too slow, and lasted too long during the action sequences, which made it look sort of choppy. The rock music didn't fit, and was a real mood-killer. The fade out at the end was also a little choppy. Spidey and TMNT made me chuckle a little, but again, didn't really fit the mood, or anything to the plot.
Hope this helps!
Buzz-killed
What really killed the animation is the frame rate for me. It was lagging out and if it were faster, there really would've been some intense action there but instead it was like everything went slower than it should. The music was a downer but in the end, it reminded me almost of a SHOCK tribute cause of the ending, face the bad dudes to get to the final one, etc. I enjoyed the all around style of it, but it had too many buzz kills for me to really get that full enjoyment out of it.