good
lol funny but needs more berrer animating
Reviews for "Funny Dodgeball"
Interesting concept...
I have to admit, I almost giggled (It takes a lot to make me actually laugh out loud, so that's a compliment). The animation wasn't very good, but you've got potential.
Also, the spoken part was quality. Maybe try voice acting some day if the flash thing doesn't work out.
The story was funny
heh, the story and voices awere actually pretty funny, and the animation integrity wasn't too bad, especially for a day. Just work a little harder on your art skills. Maybe try something more complex than stick figures next time? I had trouble distinguishing which stick was which person, so that's why I'm offering advice ^_^;
nice try
nice try the animation sucked but the humour was good you just need to practice some more....a lot more
Mediocre at best
This is nothing short of bland anticipation. You place yourself in a position to being critisized and that in itself is respectable, but to be true to yourself your focus toward creative displays such as this needs to be improved and presented in perhaps a more diverse and inspirationally charged flash.
Take in the comments from the reviews previous to this. They are genuine, with interest toward your development and true to the nature of the flash. My advice is simply to work longer on your flash and refine it to the point of being a beacon of anticipation, satisfaction and being something different and remarkable.