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Reviews for "Funny Dodgeball"

Mediocre at best

This is nothing short of bland anticipation. You place yourself in a position to being critisized and that in itself is respectable, but to be true to yourself your focus toward creative displays such as this needs to be improved and presented in perhaps a more diverse and inspirationally charged flash.
Take in the comments from the reviews previous to this. They are genuine, with interest toward your development and true to the nature of the flash. My advice is simply to work longer on your flash and refine it to the point of being a beacon of anticipation, satisfaction and being something different and remarkable.

The story was funny

heh, the story and voices awere actually pretty funny, and the animation integrity wasn't too bad, especially for a day. Just work a little harder on your art skills. Maybe try something more complex than stick figures next time? I had trouble distinguishing which stick was which person, so that's why I'm offering advice ^_^;

Interesting concept...

I have to admit, I almost giggled (It takes a lot to make me actually laugh out loud, so that's a compliment). The animation wasn't very good, but you've got potential.
Also, the spoken part was quality. Maybe try voice acting some day if the flash thing doesn't work out.

nice try

nice try the animation sucked but the humour was good you just need to practice some more....a lot more

Welldone!

_Review_
This movie is pretty good. There is humor and action. You included an intro which is good.

_Advice_
Maybe draw better characters next time and make it longer.

_In Conclusion_
A job well done. This is a pretty good flash for a 2nd timer. Keep it up!

_TheCrimsonHunter_